Gotta love the eyebrows over the hair effect. Cracks me up every time I see it.

Ooo! Nice

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Okay, this one I can critique.

First off, the chest. Seems I'm always commenting about it... no, not awkward XD With the angle, making her right one--the far one--just as big as the near one would mean that it's actually a little bit bigger. So it'd be better if the line in between them was a little farther to the viewer's left and, since her left one is higher up and I'm assuming being pushed up by her pose, the line should also go up higher on her left (viewer's right) side because more of the flesh would be pushed toward the center.

The other thing is that it's very awkward to hold your arm like she's holding her left. You'll notice if you stand with your arm by your side that the palm is facing inward. Having the inside of her arm turned outward like that makes me think of people holding the inside of their elbows where they've gotten blood drawn. If she's simply supposed to be standing there and holding one arm, it's better for the pose to show the outside of her elbow and have her palm facing in.

Whew! There you have it.

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Aww, she looks so cute here~! I think it came out nicely. THanks so much

Do you mind if I share this on the main ZK site?

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Kojika, as when I did Peorth for you so long ago I said that it was you who decided ^^ she is after all your character . So you do what you want to do, I ain't stoppin ya ^^.

And thanks ^^, I originally was going to have her holding like a child in her arms with them cradling the child, buuuut something just went another way and this came out ^^. I love to draw your characters I think nina is cooliest .

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_{Stagnant life, held in repose.
Forever reaching, the same as if froze.
Humanities fate is as eternities pass.
Curses those of Synr born,
forever tormented as they mourn.
Humanities destiny is as cruel fate.}

lol indeed wanna do an art trade?

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Forever reaching, the same as if froze.
Humanities fate is as eternities pass.
Curses those of Synr born,
forever tormented as they mourn.
Humanities destiny is as cruel fate.}

Lol, well, though the character is mine, the art belongs to you, so without both our okays, I don't feel that I should have the right to do anything with it, lol.

Lol XD Aw, thanks so much~! I'm actually not too overly fond of Nina myself, but I love all my characters in their own ways, lol.

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Lol true but without you I would never have made this then. But lol this is your art to place where you want ^^. And lol I can understand why xD. We all love our characters for who they are, just not necessarily love them "that" much xD

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_{Stagnant life, held in repose.
Forever reaching, the same as if froze.
Humanities fate is as eternities pass.
Curses those of Synr born,
forever tormented as they mourn.
Humanities destiny is as cruel fate.}

really nice, just should have had her hand facing the other way other then palm up that way it curved inward with her body its great tho